DLO

seasonal poem

kia ora today we had to finish off our poems, but today we started a new poem, we had to choose a season and I chose autumn. and this is what I got up to

belonging to me peom

 

Kia ora it's Emily again back in to post another blog post, about my school learning. So today we had to finish doing are belonging to my poem. This is my blog post hope you enjoyed 

the tree of life

 she held hope in her outstretched hands. knelling gently on the ground, she prepared herself for what she knew she must do. The cool water trickled through her muddy fingers, and the soft, black earth felt comfortingly warm on her palms.

planting the tree of life would mean a new beginning. the opportunities were endless....

felling the Excitement course through her Quivering body she lowered the tree of life into a small hole she had prepared .it was time......

MASSIVE clouds of dust flying everywhere, she couldn't see a thing. The plant that she had, nobody had never seen that before she took two steps back .... swwwhhhh she was gone. landing on her back, back-slapping her back agest the blue water. She was amazed.

  She could not believe her eyes .. a couple of minutes later she was jumping off the cliff, she was filled with a lot of excitement but then she heard a lot of booms everywhere, the water starts to shake a lot. heaps of animals were appearing everywhere the whole world was changing. mountains were vanishing away and bring back amazing light green mountains. she could believe she was holding a lot of power when she had it in her hands she lived such a lovely nice beautiful life in the end.

hope you enjoyed Emily

Today we had to finish doing our tree of life stuff.

and this is what I finished doing not a lot but still amazing. go check out my other classmate's blogs they have done such a great job on there.

WALT -use descriptive language

   

It was a really boiling hot summer day when Casey and I were on our way to nelson with our nana. I took a look out of the window when we arrived in wakefield (where she lives)  and I saw heaps of cars everywhere it was really busy everywhere, people walking around traffic lights changing to red then orange then green. everywhere I went, I could smell gas, oil leaking, dusty roads. while we were driving around town I heard so many noises like horns beeping at other people, the worst one of all brack squealing, people laughing, and beers cheerings. After an amazing chill drives around town, we were on our way back to nanas house. Time passed as we drove past a whole bunch of sheep, all I could taste was sheep poo and their stinky FEET.

   

DLO

today we were doing a task, the task was we had to pick out of miss farrs hat and there were numbers in the hat and she went around the class holding up her hat and, we put our hand in and picked out a number the number, we got we had to look at the tv and see one you got. started off we were doing kawa of care first then Miss farr gave us a task to do. I got number 5 and did a DLO on the sentence  I got. everyone else got a number and had to do a DLO for Miss farr. what we had to do its make a DLO then post it on our blog then write a quality caption. After all, it was fun. by Emily