today we had to draw a snowman on our Chromebooks and I think mines ok. I use the thin lines to get my thin lines on my picture. why did we have to, why the cause of the story look at my other one about the story about the snowman on the door step.
Kia ora Emily C, this is Olivia from Ahipara school speaking. I really like your snowman, it looks really cute. I also like how you explained what you had to do. Maybe next time could you fix you punctuation and grammar. Keep up the good work! Your friend Olivia.
Kia ora Emily C, Dayton from Ahipara school here. I really like how you made a photo of a snowman it was very colourful and cool. Maybe next time use grammar and punctuation. Keep up the good work!!
kia Dayton thanks for giving me feedback on my work make sure you check my other work I have been tring to make my work BTB for a wee while and Im getting there thanks so much for commenting on my blog byeee
Kia ora Emily C, this is Olivia from Ahipara school speaking. I really like your snowman, it looks really cute. I also like how you explained what you had to do. Maybe next time could you fix you punctuation and grammar. Keep up the good work! Your friend Olivia.
ReplyDeletekia ora oliva thank you for commenting on my blog thanks for the feed back i will sure take you feed back and ues it
DeleteKia ora Emily C, Dayton from Ahipara school here. I really like how you made a photo of a snowman it was very colourful and cool. Maybe next time use grammar and punctuation. Keep up the good work!!
ReplyDeletekia Dayton thanks for giving me feedback on my work make sure you check my other work I have been tring to make my work BTB for a wee while and Im getting there thanks so much for commenting on my blog byeee
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