Tuesday, September 22, 2020

bridge valley camp recount

 on a cold sunny morning year 6, 7 arrived at school ready and packed for a four-hour drive that mornib=ng we were going to bridge valley in wakefield. I put my bag in the trailer full of other bags. Everyone walked to there vans and choose their seats. the people in my van were Aaron, Harlem,gus, luke, Kaiden, Keil, Bella, Clara, Tahlia, Taj, and zakaia.15 minutes later we set off. As Kriston turned the sounds up the whole way we say to the music. We stopped for toilet stops an hour later we arrived at Murchison's park we all sprang out of the van a ran across the road.sitting under a tree bitting on a yummy sandwich, after the 20 minutes was an up we all got back in our vans and set back on the road. singing along to the music,we started to tell jokes even secrets I look out the window and saw sheep, cows, wood all sorts of stuff.1 hour left Kriston Yaya yelled out everyone.1 hour later we arrived at bridge valley everyone jumping off their feet cant waits a little bit more. I grabbed my bags from the trailer and walk to take a peek around the corner Clara screamed everyone ran to what it was everyone could not believe their eyes a massive playground, a big lake/pond, water slides tramp,, golf course, and amazing activities. we sat down on the court and qe introduce himself and Meka , Clara,katlyen, Tahlia, Eden walked to are rooms.on the right miss Farr says ok we say. we ran into the cabin jumping with excitement after ten minutes we got called over to the court qe said its time for your first activity we got split into groups, we got told what we were doing the first activity was orienteering are adult got givin the sheet with the answers on it and we got a map to find the numbers. we found all of the numbers and went to our next activity.it was saving Jolan.it was tricky we had to not put Jolan on the ground and carry him on the stretcher. we finish that activity and went to have dinner. after dinner we had supper then went to bed.

day 2.the next morning I had toast for breakfast and got dressed for a fun day. my first activity was the Burma trail. we had to wear masks over our eyes and walk in the bush holding a rope. that activity was super fun.

are next activity was laser tag.I was on the red team we won two games, the blue team one one game. after laser tag we had low ropes. one thing I did not like was it took forever everyone keeps falling over or wasting are time and not doing the activities.



day 3.on Thursday the activities we did were team initiatives we had to pull a rope and trust are teammates while we hold the rope and they climb up the rope and try to get an item. after team initiatives we did fire and damper we lit a fire and got a stick and put are down on it and cooked in then put cinnamon on it.it was delishos.then it was abseiling jari went first then me then lucy and the other people.it was scary I thought i was gonna die and fall but qe said he had another rope connected to me. after I went down I had a second turn.that 2 times I was more confident. after we did kayaking I end up jumping in the pond the best part was when fliped slades kayak Tahila and Slade had the fight to try to push each other in the water. after we clean are self up and walk over to the archery. i shot the yellow but I was not close to the middle at all. the gong rang so we walked over to the court it was dinner time after dinner we had a concert my team did a dance we did savage.then went to bed. 


day 4 (last day)we got up packed our bags ready to go home we meet on the court and qe played fresh a game that he tort us after we finished the game we had a snack and said goodbye and went in our vans and drove off. we were ready for an annoying trip home.





9 comments:

  1. Hi Emily I like your blog post it is very good. Next time you could a medium amount of words. Ka pai Emily. Lailani

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  2. Hi Emily, I am Ilaisaane from Edmund Hillary School. I really like your recount and how you explained everything that had happened. One thing to remember is to proof read your writing because I've found some mistakes.

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  3. Hi Emily, its Kryzma from ahipara school nice work in this beautiful writing and maybe next time add more punctuation, Nice Job.

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  6. Hi Emily i am Azaria from Edmund Hillary School i liked your recount and how you had explained everything but next time you could proof read to make sure there are no mistakes. but keep up the good work

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    1. thanks for your feed back i will proof read my work thanks

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